blog #3

FADE IN

INT/EXT. STREETS - DAY/NIGHT

TWO SEVEN YEAR OLDS ride in backseat as a YELLOW BEETLE drives by. One punches the other.

LITTLE BOY

Yellow one.

BLUE JETTA turns left at intersection. WOMAN in city bus punches the DRIVER in the arm.

WOMAN

Blue one.

TWO 40 YEAR OLD WOMEN power walk in their neighborhood past a driveway with a RED JETTA STATIONWAGON. One punches the other.

Powerwalking woman

Red one!

WHITE VOLKSWAGEN SUV passes a SHERIFF CAR with TWO SHERIFFS inside. Sheriff punches the other.

SHeriff

White one.

Other sheriff looks over, annoyed.

GIRL gets punched in mini-van in arm. GUY punches GIRL driving a convertable.TWO people stand in the rain, one punches the other as a red car drives by.

BLACK MINI VAN drives by as LITTLE BOY punches GRANDPA in leg.

LITTLE BOY

Black one!

Grandpa screams.

SILVER CAR drives by ambulance and parks as a nurse inside the ambulance punches the other while taking care of patient.

NURSE #1

Silver one.

Guy punches girl in arm. Waitress punches man in arm as he holds coffee and spills it.

BLUE CAR shown.

Woman in car in labor breathing hard as car drives by deep punches husband.

PREGNANT WOMAN

Green one.

RED CAR drives past AMISH BUGGY. AMISH punches the other.

AMISH

Red one.

TWO GUYS in messy party clothes, guy punches passed out friend.

GUY

Green one.

Girl punches girl, guy gets punched in the tattoo. TWO GUYS putting wetsuits on, one guy punches his friend, the friend falls down.

GUY

White one.

FALLING DOWN GUY

Dude!

RED JETTA pulls away from curb.

STEVIE WONDER

Red one!

Stevie Wonder punches TRACY MORGAN.

TRACY MORGAN

How do you do that?

STEVIE WONDER

Ha.

TRACY MORGAN

Ha nothing! How you did that?

STEVIE WONDER

I said ha!

TRACY MORGAN

Alright!

Volkswagen ad at the end.

Deep voice (V.O.)

With thirteen different models, it's a whole new Volkswagen, and a whole new game.

FADE OUT

(Sorry I couldn't figure out how to export from Celtx so it's not in the correct script format)

I just used a commercial for my script, but it still has sound design involved even though it may be simple. I would say that most of the sounds are literal. Most of the sounds are either people talking or punching each other besides the music in the background. I would say the sources of sound are non-diagetic because although there are punching noises, talking, ambulance noises, there is also music in the background that the characters wouldn't be able to hear in the scenes. There would be limited sound in this commercial because most of it is the music in the background and foreground noises such as people talking.